theinfernumflame's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shame by the Slice 2]

Not bad

Not too bad. Decent humor and storytelling. The animation was tighter, as you said it would be. The manager ending up in wherever he was (certainly not Kentucky) was a nice touch.

There were a couple things that bugged me though.

First -- the sluggish animation. It just seemed like everything was moving in slow motion with every scene.

Second -- It seemed like you had the floating manager set up as some sort of hellspawn in the previous episode, and I was disappointed to see you apparently abandoned that. Maybe he just appeared that way to the other employees in the previous episode, but that was never actually clear.

I suppose the same could be said about the regular manager too -- if he meant what he said about floating managers as a joke in the previous episode, I don't know that he should have sounded so serious about it or gone on so long about it.

So yeah, a pretty good flash outside of that. Continuity (story-wise) seems to be the biggest issue so far.

BaconMask responds:

I see what you're saying about the animation. It's smooth, but at the same time, everyone takes a little too long to do anything. Fair enough. Good suggestions, very appreciated. Thanks a lot for reviewing!

[Spaced Out! (Pilot)]

Great idea

It's a great idea for a show, but it's not as funny as it could be. You definitely have something here, just work a bit on the humor.

grim-studios responds:

Workin' on it as I speak. :)

[Metal]

Pretty entertaining

Short, but worth watching. The animation was pretty good, and the whole thing was kinda funny.

AlmightyHans responds:

um, this thing was ment for a colab thats why its o short ;)