Not too bad. Decent humor and storytelling. The animation was tighter, as you said it would be. The manager ending up in wherever he was (certainly not Kentucky) was a nice touch.
There were a couple things that bugged me though.
First -- the sluggish animation. It just seemed like everything was moving in slow motion with every scene.
Second -- It seemed like you had the floating manager set up as some sort of hellspawn in the previous episode, and I was disappointed to see you apparently abandoned that. Maybe he just appeared that way to the other employees in the previous episode, but that was never actually clear.
I suppose the same could be said about the regular manager too -- if he meant what he said about floating managers as a joke in the previous episode, I don't know that he should have sounded so serious about it or gone on so long about it.
So yeah, a pretty good flash outside of that. Continuity (story-wise) seems to be the biggest issue so far.
I see what you're saying about the animation. It's smooth, but at the same time, everyone takes a little too long to do anything. Fair enough. Good suggestions, very appreciated. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Not a bad flash. The graphics weren't the best, but they got the job done. I do like how you told the story of the song and showed what really happened that night. The animation was ok, but like I said before, it did get the job done.
And as for the dufus below me, I hope you realize you're supposed to rate the flash, not the music. You can't give all 0's because you don't like the music.
Something simple to do (if you know anything about perspective), but something so many people would never think to do. Very well done. There still are a couple minor sync problems near the end, but overall that was great.
The sync did get anoying. It'll be better.
I gotta say...
I have to agree with everyone else...you had something awesome going there, but that ending more than killed it. You should have finished out with whatever was going on before instead of changing to something totally random and pointless.
You've done it again
Another taste of the ever-creepy and mysterious Salad Fingers. Even though I'm sitting there wondering wtf is happening half the time, I am still amazed at this series. Keep 'em coming!
Very well done
Oh wow that was good. And hilarious too. Great job.
Very well done, good for quite a few laughs. I have to say that's a side of Star Wars I haven't seen.
Not too bad
Overall, the movie was pretty funny. The sound quality was good, but the graphics (specifically, the animation) could have been quite a bit better. Still, it's worth seeing.
This stuff is just too funny. Keep up the good work!
Kinda reminded me of the Simpsons. Could have been a bit funnier though, but great idea.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.