Not too bad. Decent humor and storytelling. The animation was tighter, as you said it would be. The manager ending up in wherever he was (certainly not Kentucky) was a nice touch.
There were a couple things that bugged me though.
First -- the sluggish animation. It just seemed like everything was moving in slow motion with every scene.
Second -- It seemed like you had the floating manager set up as some sort of hellspawn in the previous episode, and I was disappointed to see you apparently abandoned that. Maybe he just appeared that way to the other employees in the previous episode, but that was never actually clear.
I suppose the same could be said about the regular manager too -- if he meant what he said about floating managers as a joke in the previous episode, I don't know that he should have sounded so serious about it or gone on so long about it.
So yeah, a pretty good flash outside of that. Continuity (story-wise) seems to be the biggest issue so far.
I see what you're saying about the animation. It's smooth, but at the same time, everyone takes a little too long to do anything. Fair enough. Good suggestions, very appreciated. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Not a bad flash. The graphics weren't the best, but they got the job done. I do like how you told the story of the song and showed what really happened that night. The animation was ok, but like I said before, it did get the job done.
And as for the dufus below me, I hope you realize you're supposed to rate the flash, not the music. You can't give all 0's because you don't like the music.
Something simple to do (if you know anything about perspective), but something so many people would never think to do. Very well done. There still are a couple minor sync problems near the end, but overall that was great.
The sync did get anoying. It'll be better.
Excellent game. Feel like soccer meets american football with the frantic pacing of a hockey game. Some of the player names are especially creative.
My only complaint is the somewhat loose controls that do make the game a bit harder than it has to be (especially when attempted to tackle people).
But all in all a great game.
I like it
That's pretty cool. Gives a good idea of what the house is like, and the extra area was sweet.
Simple game, but it's addicting. After all, they promise something special if you hit all the frogs, so it's hard to stop playing till you get there.
I've always loved your music, but this one makes my jaw drop. The vocals are perfect, the instrumentation gives just the right depressing/ominous feeling. I've been poking around for music for a series I'm going to be posting on Newgrounds, and while this song might not be it (although a small part of it might work well), I still downloaded it.
The only flaws, really, were that some of the instruments seemed a bit too abrupt, especially the loud strings that started coming in at 0:25. Those especially seemed out of place (maybe they needed more reverb or something, but they were definitely a bit too loud).
That said, though, still an excellent piece of work, and at least parts of it will likely end up in the series.
this song was the last song in which I didn't throw my hand into equalizing as much as I should have. It was after making this song I realized just how crucial it was to equalize the song perfectly instead of half heartadly.
I agree with you fully, this song could have been better with some good equalizing. Making sure the instruments work together better, doesn't hide the voice as much, reduce mufflement etc.
I hope you will inform me when your series is out, I would definitely like to see it!
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it ^^.
Another brilliant piece from you. The whole thing was pretty much solid, except that the transition to the flute solo near the end seemed a bit rough, and the ending seemed a little too sudden. It just seemed like the change of pace was a bit too much (maybe that's what you were going for, I don't know). Outside of that, an excellent piece. Keep it up.
That part did seem a tad abrupt didn't it? It's a minor variation of the beginning "get up and go" segment, and it probably could have been handled better. I don't remember if it was lack of ideas, or lack of energy that resulted in a rushed entrance, but whichever it was, the music... she suffer for eternity because of such :(
I assure you, that will happen far less!
Once again you came through with another brilliant piece. The orchestrations and percussion blend perfectly together.
The only thing that seems a little off is that it seems like it has the potential to be more epic, if you know what I mean. You know, I can see a scene playing through my head, but this piece doesn't seem to hit that high point or climax as strongly as it could.
Aside from that, though, this piece is very well done.
Oh this song had much much more potential then I let it have. The song was supposed to be only 1 minute long for a contest, however this song is already around 1:42, so instead of already cutting out more, I left it like this. However I will more then likely come back to it, and epicify it some more!
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you enjoyed the piece ^^.
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